In the open air,
And I let the soft breeze,
Play with my hair.
I think of uncertainity, and hurt,
Of pain, and reasons,
Of questions and asnwers,
And I think of the tales, that time has to tell.
I fear,
That all that will be left,
In the end, is me.
I fear.
There were those rockets,
And chits in one of those
Eight pockets,
Whispering and bickering,
And while we're doing the ing,
Lets not forget mimicking,
And kissing, and the game of spinning.
I fear,
That all that will be left,
In the end, is me.
I fear.
Standing up to the teacher,
Calling her screecher,
Or things milder,
Like ink on her back,
And chalk pieces that went astray,
At times, even pink hair,
Just to stir up things,
And put a sparkle in the air.
I fear,
That maybe, I hurt a few people.
That they don't know, won't know,
I didn't mean to.
And that all that will be left,
In the end, is me.
I fear.
We wrote essays on "who I want to be",
You said astronaut,
And some one else said mother teresa,
Another said Cruise,
A vet, an engineer, a teacher...
Remember?
Our minds were set,
And the future clear.
Who knew that even with Tide,
And our options so wide,
We'd wind up with doubts,
Doubts oh so many,
That even senile,
Was a word too mild.
I fear,
That maybe, I'm not meant to be.
that all that will be left,
In the end, is me.
I fear.
There were days when,
All that made sense was Bad meeting Evil,
And only the noise that is Crawling,
Surrounded me.
Thoughts about When I'm Gone,
That In The End, it won't really matter.
Clouds weren't numbered 1-9,
There was not a Lemon Tree in sight,
And Every Other Time,
I'd wish you'd Wake me up when September had come to an End.
I fear,
That maybe, all that there is,
is the dust,
That all that will be left,
In the end, is me.
I fear.
But with you around,
I never gave up me dreams,
I could stay sound, as sound as sound can be,
And the sun still shone with golden beams,
I've managed to emerge,
with both my feet on the ground,
My head is held high,
Thank God for gravity.
For I still believe in pots of gold,
Of a better world,
At the end of the rainbow,
Of every deed making a difference,
No matter how small.
I fear,
That maybe,
The stars really aren't twinkling,
That all that will be left,
In the end, is me.
I fear.
There is a prince charming,
And it's okay to dream,
There will have to be candlelight,
And it's okay, if sometimes they dont come true,
There will have to be flowers, no roses though,
And it's okay to cry,
There will have to be chocolate,
As long as I have you,
And there will have to be dancing,
Because else, you have no deal.
Because else, you have no deal.
I fear,
That maybe, I am a dreamer.
And that all that will be left,
In the end, is me.
I fear.
As I sit on my chair,
In the open air,
And let the soft breeze,
play with my hair,
And bring back memories of a time,
That never fail to bring a smile,
And a laugh to accompany the tear,
That wipes away all the fear.
Now, it is time for the evil laugh........ hehahahhahaha. Lol. I know, it's a sad attempt, but I just wanted to say thank you. For everything. You guys are all crazy, for coming here again and again. For bearing with me. My laughs, my cries and my temper, which is non existant. For bearing with vague theories, and lemon cookies, and everything. Pretty much. I love you guys. And from the bottom of my heart, and for Kaushik, from the bottomest vien of this pumping organ, Shukriya.
Happy Friendhsips day.. Hope you guys have a lovely day,
Yours forever sthupitly.
The evil laugh goes something like this ---->
MWUHUHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA (or_
BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Nice poem :P Although the lyrics in certain parts seemed to remind me of songs by Linkin Park And 1 line in particular " I wish you would wake me up when september comes to an end " kinda reminds me of Wake me up when September ends :P All said and done im being mean as usual ( The treatment is not going well :P ) But nice poem :P Has a nice ring to it
Rythwin
P.S.: < Ignore this Post Script >
You mean this was ALL your work??? How could a single person do so much damage???
Ah...nevermind...atleast I can proudly say that I know someone who writes poetry just like me :) (*wink wink)
happy friendship day
@ry: THAT WAS THE POINT. Linkin Park, Coldplay, Eminem. Pah. Think before you speak smartypants. Thankus for the pity.
@nav: i DO NOT write like you. hmph.
wish you the same.
Thankus for bisiting guys,
Yours forever sthupitly.
happy friendships day
nice poem...u shud have added where'd you go after when i'm gone!!
love you loads...you are a very important part of my life and i cant imagine lving without you to guide me thru
love,
me
happy friendship's day!
but how are we sharing titles?
since i have no other way of communicating to my most ardent fan...
@bani: have posted again on between the two of us...
happy friendship day.. :).. im sorry but emotionally exhausted didnt even wanna talk about wat happend.. i shal tell u sometime later i promise.. right now i cant..
and im eating my words.. they taste horrible..
BWHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
I knew that :P Happy freindship day.. ROFL... U actually read thru my comment after reading my prev. ones :P
Rythwin
Nice poem there..
It has a bit of everything...
Seriousness, fantasia, mysticism, humour (the teacher bit was funny), insane length (:P) & names of Songs!!?!? Lol..
With a little tweak here & there with someone playing a guitar, you could pretty much make this a song..
& wow! You got the rhythm right.. Most ppl who write poetry completely miss that out!! But heck! Anything erratic is poetry.. & always has been.. Its come a long way from the golden rule 'the words MUST rhyme'!
& Oops! I forget my manners..
Happy Friendship's day.. :)
Well, say what you will, but I thought the poem was very nice! I liked these lines the most:
And it's okay, if sometimes they dont come true,
There will have to be flowers, no roses though...
Well done! And do keep writing!
I love it..:) And what's more, it rhymes!
The fact that you put together such a long one with rhymes makes you my hero for this week.. ^:)^
I love the Prince Charming stanza :D.. But most of all I like this:
~~For I still believe in pots of gold,
Of a better world,
At the end of the rainbow,
Of every deed making a difference,
No matter how small.~~
Belated Happy Friendship Day.. *Hugs*
@sis: lol. thankus bery much. and it works both ways.
@anna: the sthupit girl title.
@me: hey i'm a fan too. sob sniff sniff.
@vishal: hey.. that's k. i'm just surprised i havent' heard about it.. I mean i know a lot of people there. *hugs* .
@vishal(again): like they say it, hindsight may be good, but it isnt one helluva place to be at :) . It'll be okay... dnt push yourself.
@Ry: touche`.
@arvind: thankus, i guess. :)
@anjan: of course i was fishing. Sigh. and all i get is "it isn't all that lame".
@sandeep: ellos. Thankus. Would love to see you here again, though i'd like to put all your fears to rest and tell you that U wnt see alot of poerty here unless ofcourse I'm making smartassed remarks about someone elses :) In fact, this is a first.
@triya: coming from you, it's damn high praise. You'd better watch your words, or you'll create a monster :)
Thankus for bisiting guys... To tell you the truth, this is one of the few pieces of my work that I actually really really like. Lotsaluv and hugs,
Yours forever sthupitly.
Heheh. Darling, with you being my cosmic twin, I know for a fact that you're already a monster..:D A lil praise is not going to make much of a difference.
*Hugs*
Post something FAST!!! Im irritated and bored sitting at home :'( Ive got nothing better to do but look at blogs :@ POST!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@triya: well that's comforting.
@Ry: your every wish is my command.
YOurs forever sthupitly.
Bryan Adams` Cloud No.9, through Greenday's Wake me up when september ends, till Nick Lachey's What's left of me. I admit of my poor poetry loving sense. For i could be really so idiothic.. But have u ever read the poems of gothics? Poetry is so simple to write, you know.. Just F E E L and W R I Г £ · ·. αβς .. sorry, my INK stopped working.
@ppl: please stop mocking at people for writing abnormally lengthy blogs, poetry or comments. i hate it.. it's now the most common thing, for i'm included in the list as well. :@
Oh yeah, velated happy friendship day.. and also adbanced wishes for the next one.
I forgot my sig as well:
NeoDarwinian
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A little bit of gibbersish tehre here and.
bish bou dhe bame.
Yours forever sthupitly.